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A NEW CHAPTER! FINALLY!
I'm sorry, again guys, I know this took forever, but you know I've not exactly been idle
Next chapter is basically done, so you should get that nice and quick
A little more forward moving with Frank and Gerard...
And then, possibly, a major step back.
Also... Alice! Anyone else missed Alice? I've missed Alice, so it was nice to write her again.
She doesn't like Sammy much either
Thank you, as always everyone who reads this, and to those who give me feedback of any form, it's very much appreciated
And, as ever, thank you to my super awesome beta ~N1ghtAnge1 for pointing out what flows, what doesn't and generally telling me to stop being so pessimistic
(and for the most awesome of front cover art )
Previous Chapters:
Prologue - fav.me/d5l94vs
Chapter 1 - fav.me/d5pm2a0
Chapter 2 parts 1 & 2 - fav.me/d5tqqwh fav.me/d5tqvk2
Chapter 3 - fav.me/d5xin1m
Chapter 4 - fav.me/d638cs3
Chapter 5 - fav.me/d651mye
Chapter 6 - fav.me/d67a7me
Chapter 7 - fav.me/d6dpufh
Chapter 8 - fav.me/d6i01qs
Chapter 9 - fav.me/d6kqa7i
>_> and dude if they both die from some STD i will be furious.
I don't understand Alice, btw. She's a little crazy to me. how can she admire Jimmy's business...? I don't understand. He's... a PIMP. a drug dealing, abusive, volatile pimp. maybe they have some kind of past that hasn't been revealed, but otherwise... i don't quite get her. she sympathizes and yet... encourages it.
she was so sweet to frank, so its hard to feel like that. i want to like her. but man... she's confusing...